He secretly took a wallet from the shelf, look around and check is anyone is looking at him. His heartbeat increases every second as he squeeze that wallet into his bag. Feeling very nervous, he quicken his pace. “HEY BOY!” a man yelled catching everyone’s attention. His future is ruined.
As David receives the call from the hospital, he smash his phone onto the wall and rush to the hospital. He stood motionless in horror when he saw his mother covered with white cloth. He ran towards the copse with tears trickling down his check, giving it a last kiss.
“321 GO!” I suck in a big gulp of air and sprint towards the ending point. Suddenly, I tripped onto my shoelace and fall onto the ground. Slowly, I get my feet up and struggle to the ending point. The crowd stood and applause when i cross the ending line.
With tears in her eyes, Mary slowly open up the dusty box and took out a picture taken with her ex-boyfriend. She place it tightly on her chest and start cursing out loud. Next, she tore the picture into a million pieces and throw it high up to the air.
Peter anxiously flip through the exam paper feeling very nervous with thoughts running through his mind. He grab his pen, staring blankly onto the paper. He slip one hand into his pocket and pull out pieces of paper. Ms Sharon stood behind him, and gave him a big fat zero!
These are good stories, all told in 50 words, and all with a beginning, middle and an end. Good work!